The Briefly Write Prompt Game aims to inspire bold, succinct micro fiction and poetry.
Every Wednesday, we will provide a brief prompt to inspire your boldest prose or verse. The prompts will be released on Twitter (via @BrieflyWrite) and right here on the website.
Your creation can take any form and any style. The prompts can (and should) be interpreted loosely.
This week’s prompt ~
Use the word UNDERWHELMED in your micro story or poem
A huge thank you to everyone who submitted to our inaugural micro competition. We received 116 entries and thoroughly enjoyed reading all of them. Entries were read anonymously by a panel of four judges.
We were treated to an inspiring mix of discoveries: everything from witches, treasure hunters, weddings, gods and new books to space, presents, mirrors, moons and murderers.
After many hours of deliberation, we are delighted to reveal that the winner is Rebecca Kinnarney. Rebecca’s story stood out for its humour, clever construction and inventive take on the theme.
The following writers made the shortlist: Laura Besley, Mandira Pattnaik, William Davis, Jessica Klimesh, Ruth Callaghan do Valle, Susy Churchill, Linda Sejung Park, Rita Lazaro and Gunnar De Winter. They all managed to tell a full story in ten words, hiding layers of meaning beneath the surface.
You can read our 10 selected stories below.
WINNER (£10)
10th January. One mince pie left. It must be love.
Rebecca Kinnarney
SHORTLIST
Letters unearthed. “Dad’s dead, you said.” “Sorry, love” Mum whispered.
Laura Besley
Childhood friend. Shared bed, dreams. Got married. Discovered a stranger.
Mandira Pattnaik
we sailed amongst the unnamed latitudes trading words for home
William Davis
Fumble for glasses, lamp. Open door to crickets singing summer.
Jessica Klimesh
Explorar: Explore / Exploit – An isthmus in ink – In Brazil landlessness
Ruth Callaghan do Valle
He emptied drawers, dispatched belongings. Every space revealed her face.
Susy Churchill
In bulging bags of homemade food, I found her heart.
Linda Sejung Park
Blue Light. Human gone. Empty bowl. Cat affronted. Now alone.
Rita Lazaro
“Look,” said grandfather, “endless worlds await.” He opened the book.
Gunnar De Winter
Judges’ notes:
The quality was exceptionally high. From our longlist of 30, we had a hard time getting down to a shortlist of 10.
The winner and shortlisted entries all told a story. It didn’t matter whether this was a grand tale of adventure or a tiny snapshot of a moment; each one narrated a full story in 10 words.
The best stories adhered closely to the theme, but perhaps approached ‘discovery’ from a less obvious angle.
It was important not to waste any words. Some promising stories that made the longlist were dropped on the basis of a single word that felt forced or out of place.
Clever use of punctuation made some stories stand out. Breaking up the 10 words allowed them to go further.
Briefly Zine is a literary journal seeking bold, succinct writing and photography. We publish writers and photographers from the UK and around the world.
We are open for Issue 10 submissions until 15 February 2023.
Writing that blurs genres (prose poems, poetic prose, etc.) is welcome.
BRIEFLY RIGHT:
Submit up to three pieces of your best brief writing
Paste your work into the body of an email and send it to submissions@brieflywrite.com
Include a short third-person bio (under 50 words). Please don’t feel any pressure with this – we choose our favourite photos, poems and stories, not the publication history of the author
Please only submit previously unpublished work, i.e. nothing that has appeared in print or online (including on a personal website or social media)
Simultaneous submissions are okay, but please do make sure to let us know if your work is accepted elsewhere
Please wait for our reply before sending more work. If we publish your writing, please wait at least two issues before submitting again
BRIEFLY WRONG:
We will not publish writing or photos that are sexist, racist, classist, homophobic, transphobic, ableist or speciesist
We are unlikely to be interested in gratuitous sex or violence
Our response time can be anywhere up to two months. If you haven’t heard back after six weeks, feel free to send us a gentle nudge to check we received your submission.
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Submit your photography, poetry or prose in the normal way, mentioning in your email that you have donated.
Please note: We select our favourite writing and photography; whether or not you donate will have no impact on the outcome of your submission. We do, however, greatly appreciate any support. Every penny we receive goes directly to running Briefly Write.
Please send up to 3 images (attached as JPEG files) in an email to submissions@brieflywrite.com
All work must be your own. We are looking for original and unpublished photographs only.
We want creative, thoughtful and thought-provoking images. Photos of people or pets are unlikely to be accepted. Any images that discriminate against a particular group will not be considered.
In the body of your email, please include a short third-person bio. You can also add links to your website/social media, which we would be happy to promote.
We respond to photography submissions within two months, probably sooner. If you haven’t heard back after this time, please contact us to check your email hasn’t gone astray.
Unfortunately, we cannot pay contributors at this time. We will, however, promote you and your work through social media.