Study notes and not-so-sturdy realities

Getting By In Tligolian is a travel guide, language course, diary, philosophical treatise and dream sequence all rolled into one. It is also a thoroughly entertaining novella in flash.

Through a patchwork of pithy stories, we follow Jennifer, an unreliable narrator, around a time-twisting dystopia. In Tligol, time is not linear, death is not the end… and getting out is close to impossible.

Serendipity sets the plot of Roppotucha Greenberg’s novella in motion. Specifically, ‘a mix up with the phone booking’. From this seemingly banal springboard, Jenny experiences a series of mind-bending, meta-narrative events in multiple layers of reality.

Everything is not at it seems. For a start, Tligol is home to giants, a fact of which the reader is periodically reminded. The presence of one in particular, who dwells on a bridge in the middle of the city, is deliberately mysterious: ‘I’d begun to think I’d made him up,’ the narrator admits at one point.

Like any traveller becoming accustomed to a new city’s traditions, mores and politics, Jennifer is a suitably eyes-wide-open guide to show us around Tligol. Amid the confusion, she finds comfort in controlling the controllable, for example by learning Old Tligolian, even though the language is no longer widely spoken.

Language learning is a clever device that Greenberg uses to develop certain plot and character points. For one, learning a foreign language allows us to see the world anew with a child-like curiosity, which adds to the mystery and mystique of Tligol. ‘There is a bird in the tree,’ Jenny says. For all the complexity of phrasal verbs and the conditional mode, language learning offers a simplicity that re-sets and refreshes priorities: which words do I really need to know to describe my surroundings, my feelings, my experiences? ‘I was practising my conjugations when the explosion happened,’ she says casually, a sentence that could be taken from a textbook on the imperfect and perfect tenses.

Second, the focus on language combines smartly with Tligol’s temporal tricks. The city is a spatial representation of time: the various ‘time layers’ allow past, present and future happenings to (co-)exist spatially. This challenge to chronology is at odds with the simplicity of much occidental thought with its obsessive linearity. In Tligol, as in other traditions more in tune with the Earth, death is not at end point. Meanwhile, grief for loss can precede the joy of discovery.

While the philosophical and psychology elements succeed at every turn, the characters sometimes feel under-developed. This is epitomised by Tom, who is thrice likened to a cartoon character in the handful of interactions we have with him. First introduced as ‘more of a cartoon character than a person’, he then somehow later proceeds to ‘fossil[ise] into a cartoon version of himself’ before finally we learn that ‘he cartoonised himself’. The repetition, perhaps, is cartoonishly fitting.

For all the mystery and rootlessness, certain elements do seem overly familiar. The religion described at various points seems suspiciously Christian, with ‘candles’, ‘prayer’ and an ‘altar’. And a description of Tligolian patriotism is uncomfortably real worldly in its hostility to outsiders. ‘Nobody asked you to come here, Jenny,’ Tom retorts when she questions some of Tligol’s customs.

It is also depressing that, in a time-bending world, the reality of needless animal abuse is unchanged. In a tense scene near the end of the book, Jenny and her friend Martha discuss deep existential questions while roasting a chicken. The impact of their angsty exchange is significantly lessened by comparison with the dead bird: it is hard to take seriously their grumbles while an individual who never had a chance at life is being merrily stuffed and cooked in the background.

‘Tligol was unstable, and its streets moved when you weren’t looking,’ the narrator muses towards the end of the novella. Sometimes the familiar is the strangest of all. Sometimes, the longer we look, the stranger things we previously thought were normal start to seem.


Roppotucha Greenberg, Getting by in Tligolian (Arachne Press, 2023).

Available here.

Future Fire Grew inside Her

Patricia Flaherty Pagan


Ultrasound in hand, she scattered lupin-seed hopes on the wind.


Patricia Flaherty Pagan is a Second Prize Winner of Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024. She lives in a brown house on Boston’s north shore with her family and three mischievous rescue cats. She is the award-winning author of Enduring Spirit: Stories and Trail Ways Pilgrims. Her flash fiction has been published in journals such as Cleaver MagazineThe Ocotillo Review, and The Sirens Call. See more on her website.


Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024 asked writers for ten-word stories on the theme of DESTINY / HISTORY. It took us many many many re-reads to choose our winners. The selected stories stood out for innovative use of language, for making us feel and think, as well as careful engagement with the theme.

Briefly Write is a little literary space with big ideas. We publish a twice-yearly Zine of bold and brief micro poetry, prose and photography. We host two annual competitions – Write 10 and the Briefly Write Poetry Prize – and other occasional collections, including Briefly Think, a themed call for thoughtful short essays. We publish succinct, meaningful reviews of poetry and fiction, with a focus on debut collections and environmental themes. We also provide writing inspiration and personalised feedback in the Briefly Zone.

One moment to end – or save – our marriage

Helen MacDonald


One form, signatures required. Leave the pen. Take my hand.


Helen MacDonald is a Second Prize Winner of Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024. She is a Welsh crime fiction novelist who also dabbles in flash fiction and poetry, but not as often as she should. You can find her on X and Instagram (@helenmacwrites).


Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024 asked writers for ten-word stories on the theme of DESTINY / HISTORY. It took us many many many re-reads to choose our winners. The selected stories stood out for innovative use of language, for making us feel and think, as well as careful engagement with the theme.

Briefly Write is a little literary space with big ideas. We publish a twice-yearly Zine of bold and brief micro poetry, prose and photography. We host two annual competitions – Write 10 and the Briefly Write Poetry Prize – and other occasional collections, including Briefly Think, a themed call for thoughtful short essays. We publish succinct, meaningful reviews of poetry and fiction, with a focus on debut collections and environmental themes. We also provide writing inspiration and personalised feedback in the Briefly Zone.

A Myth

Heain Joung


My parents never hugged each other, but I was born.


Heain Joung is a Second Prize Winner of Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024. Originally from South Korea, she holds an MA in Creative and Critical Writing from Sussex University. She now lives in the UK. Her short fiction can be found in Full House Literary, Flashback Fiction, FlashFlood Journal, SugarSugarSalt Magazine, Tiny Molecules, among others. Find her on Twitter (@heainhaven).


Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024 asked writers for ten-word stories on the theme of DESTINY / HISTORY. It took us many many many re-reads to choose our winners. The selected stories stood out for innovative use of language, for making us feel and think, as well as careful engagement with the theme.

Briefly Write is a little literary space with big ideas. We publish a twice-yearly Zine of bold and brief micro poetry, prose and photography. We host two annual competitions – Write 10 and the Briefly Write Poetry Prize – and other occasional collections, including Briefly Think, a themed call for thoughtful short essays. We publish succinct, meaningful reviews of poetry and fiction, with a focus on debut collections and environmental themes. We also provide writing inspiration and personalised feedback in the Briefly Zone.

Notice

Emily Munro


Home for sale. Secure door. Own flood defences. Low price.


Emily Munro is a Second Prize Winner of Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024. She is a writer and filmmaker based in Glasgow. See more on her website.


Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024 asked writers for ten-word stories on the theme of DESTINY / HISTORY. It took us many many many re-reads to choose our winners. The selected stories stood out for innovative use of language, for making us feel and think, as well as careful engagement with the theme.

Briefly Write is a little literary space with big ideas. We publish a twice-yearly Zine of bold and brief micro poetry, prose and photography. We host two annual competitions – Write 10 and the Briefly Write Poetry Prize – and other occasional collections, including Briefly Think, a themed call for thoughtful short essays. We publish succinct, meaningful reviews of poetry and fiction, with a focus on debut collections and environmental themes. We also provide writing inspiration and personalised feedback in the Briefly Zone.

Ruins

Ilias Tsagas


Kids are playing in the temple, rearranging blocks of history.


Ilias Tsagas is a Second Prize Winner of Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024. He is a Greek poet writing in English as a second language. His poems have appeared in journals like Apogee, AMBIT, Under the Radar, Poetry Wales, streetcake, SAND, FU Review, Tokyo Poetry, Plumwood Mountain and elsewhere. Ilias will be an Artist in Residence at the European Geosciences Union (EGU) General Assembly 2024.


Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024 asked writers for ten-word stories on the theme of DESTINY / HISTORY. It took us many many many re-reads to choose our winners. The selected stories stood out for innovative use of language, for making us feel and think, as well as careful engagement with the theme.

Briefly Write is a little literary space with big ideas. We publish a twice-yearly Zine of bold and brief micro poetry, prose and photography. We host two annual competitions – Write 10 and the Briefly Write Poetry Prize – and other occasional collections, including Briefly Think, a themed call for thoughtful short essays. We publish succinct, meaningful reviews of poetry and fiction, with a focus on debut collections and environmental themes. We also provide writing inspiration and personalised feedback in the Briefly Zone.

1847

Clodagh O Connor


Crops failed. People departed. Only birds harvest blackberries this year.


Clodagh O Connor is First Prize Winner of Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024. She loves to read and is working on becoming a writer. She particularly enjoys the challenges of tiny fiction.


Briefly ‘Write 10’ 2024 asked writers for ten-word stories on the theme of DESTINY / HISTORY. It took us many many many re-reads to choose our winners. The selected stories stood out for innovative use of language, for making us feel and think, as well as careful engagement with the theme.

Briefly Write is a little literary space with big ideas. We publish a twice-yearly Zine of bold and brief micro poetry, prose and photography. We host two annual competitions – Write 10 and the Briefly Write Poetry Prize – and other occasional collections, including Briefly Think, a themed call for thoughtful short essays. We publish succinct, meaningful reviews of poetry and fiction, with a focus on debut collections and environmental themes. We also provide writing inspiration and personalised feedback in the Briefly Zone.

Write 10 – The Published Stories 2024

Tiny stories have power.

This year we asked you to write destiny / history in exactly ten words. And that is exactly what you did (except two entrants who submitted 11 👀).

What can you convey in ten words?

We had stories about mood swings, witch hunts and homecomings. From ravens to dinosaurs, biographies to pizza parties, we travelled across time, space and shadows, through small choices and momentous decisions, into time loops and repeating mistakes, into the pages of newspapers, ruins and happily ever afters…

Judging so many wonderful tiny stories was a joy and a challenge. It took us many many many re-reads to narrow our choices down to the handful we are sharing below.

As usual, we read all entries anonymously. Our chosen stories were the ones that did the most with their ten words (plus title), used language innovatively, made us feel, made us think, and best responded to the theme.

The stories we chose to share are moving and in motion, shape-shifting, shift-shaping and sure to demand re-re-reading all the way home.

Share the words, share the love, share the joy of language. Let us know what you think! And please do write – and share – many more tiny stories.

Daniel & Elinor


First Prize

Clodagh O Connor, ‘1847’


Second Prize

Ilias Tsagas, ‘Ruins’

Emily Munro, ‘Notice’

Heain Joung, ‘A Myth’

Helen MacDonald, ‘One moment to end – or save – our marriage’

Patricia Flaherty Pagan, ‘Future Fire Grew inside Her’


In 2024, we will pay more writers than ever before. We are fully funded by donations on Ko-fi and don’t take anything for ourselves as editors. Find out more here.

Briefly Write is a little literary space with big ideas. We publish a twice-yearly Zine of bold and brief micro poetry, prose and photography. We host two annual competitions – Write 10 and the Briefly Write Poetry Prize – and other occasional collections, including Briefly Think, a themed call for thoughtful short essays. We publish succinct, meaningful reviews of poetry and fiction, with a focus on debut collections and environmental themes. We also provide writing inspiration and personalised feedback in the Briefly Zone.

Poster for Briefly Write's 'Write 10' competition 2023-24

Launching Our Ten-Word Story Competition 2023-24

The rules are the same. The prizes are bigger…

Write 10 is the third instalment of Briefly Write‘s annual ten-word story competition. In 2021 and 2022, we followed a simple premise: Write 10 to Win 10. This year, we’re mixing things up a bit.

Theme: Destiny / History

The theme this year is Destiny / History. Use this loosely or literally – the choice is yours (or is it?!).

We want to see creative interpretations of the prompt. We want to see a tiny story with a full narrative arc. Or a snapshot of a moment. Or a moment snapped and shot. MAKE. EVERY. WORD. COUNT.

More Winners, More Winnings

Send us ten words (plus a few more for the title). Send us a story that makes us fall out of our chairs, fall out with each other, fall into a daydream or fall head over heels. Choose your words carefully.

Then we will read them all. And again. Andagainandagainandagain. Then we will choose (carefully) the ones that fell just right… and reward them with praise, publicity and a few pound coins.

If you would like to help increase the prize pot, please consider supporting us here – every penny we receive goes towards paying writers and artists!


Competition Guidelines

  1. Free to enter. One entry per person.
  2. Only entries made using this form will be considered.
  3. Story must be exactly 10 words and relate to the theme ‘Destiny / History’. Title is not included in word count.
  4. Please do not submit work that is under consideration elsewhere. Once submitted, your entry cannot be withdrawn.
  5. Opens: 10 December 2023. Deadline: 21 January 2024 @ 23:59 GMT.
  6. Entries judged anonymously. Editors’ decision is final.
  7. Winning and shortlisted stories will be paid and published online. All entrants will be contacted by email.
  8. Results published online by the end of March 2024. If this needs to change, an update will be provided here.
  9. By entering Write 10, you are granting us first electronic rights only. Copyright reverts to the author upon publication.
  10. If anything isn’t clear, send any queries to contact [at] brieflywrite [dot] com. Please do not email your entry.

Write 10, Win 10 (2022) – Results

Thank you to everyone who submitted ten words to the second edition of our tiny contest. Once again, we were amazed by the quality and inventiveness of our entrants’ brief writing.

This year’s theme was Reflection, an idea that can be (and was!) taken in many directions. Some writers looked in the mirror; others became the mirror. Some reflected on past lives or loves; others saw themselves reflected in people or places.

We found some absolute gems in this year’s 121 entries, including the winning and shortlisted stories published below. Every contribution sparkled in its own way, offering a brief window into a moment or memory.

Huge congratulations to Kate Twitchin and thank you again to everyone who shared their words with us: every single one was enjoyed and appreciated.


WINNER

Initial response, vitriolic. Stop, save, sleep. Pride digested, edit, send.

Kate Twitchin

SHORTLIST

Two pillowed heads turn away. Loneliness scrolls through handheld light.

Jenny Wong

I jump into the sky puddle. Splosh. Ghostly trees vanish.

Hannah Powell

The mirror looks at me. I cannot meet its gaze.

Sean Cullivan

At intersections, I envy roads. Neither to turn nor go.

Mandira Pattnaik

Shoes on feet! Am I going out or coming in?

Ann Phillips

Long orphaned, my reflection finally reunites me with my mother.

Laura Besley

After the splash in the dam, the still moon again.

Billy Antonio

The water, once pure, can hold your reflection no more.

Annelies Paris

I never thought I would follow in my child’s footsteps.

Scot Martin